As stated before I’m introducing a new mobile doll suit for the upcoming battle. It will be called Gemini and all it is, is an upgraded Taurus suit, except these suits are red instead of black, also they are slightly bigger, and they have the ability to go into a jet mode. They are also armed in two different kinds of ways. The first will have a giant Gatling gun on right arm similar to Trowa’s original Heavyarms suit, instead of the normal blaster, as well as a few micro-missiles. The other kind will have a normal blaster and will be able to produce a short beam saber for close quarter combat. Also the ones with the gatling guns can produce shielding pods like the Virgo’s, the ones with the sabers can’t but they are faster. My reason for these new suits is because I wanted it to make the final battle more believable. (5 Gundams, plus Tallgeese and a whole Preventer strike force lose to a mere 300 Virgos… lame)
Note: Lots of changes in dialogue as well as an extended battle scene. Also the dialogue during a certain character’s death scene is changed a bit to make it more believable and dramatic. My reason for this is because when I reread the old SOA, I noticed that the whole death scene had too many plot holes. Also, like in the original fic, I’ve made the Preventers mobile suit of choice the Serpent Suits, just cause well… because I can. I’ve also increased the Preventer’s attack force.
Hangar
The Gundam pilots and Zechs sat down as Sally prepared to speak.
“There’s not much time so I’m going to make this brief. If our information is correct, Kale should be leaving within 2 hours. He may be leaving under light guard, but I’m not taking any chances. In addition to the Gundams and Tallgeese, I’ll be sending 30 Preventer Cruisers, and 20 mobile suit carriers each containing 10 Serpent suits.”
“A force like that will crush Kale for good, when do we leave,” said Zechs.
“In about 30 minutes, so make your final adjustments, that is all, good luck gentlemen.”
Heero walked over to Zechs who was checking over Tallgeese.
“Hey Zechs.”
Zechs looked at him and smiled, “Hey Heero, you ready for this.”
Heero looked down, “I’m not sure, I’m excited about the fact that we can finally end the war, but I’m still worried, what if it’s an ambush?”
Zechs cut him off, “Look Heero, do you think you’re the only one that hasn’t thought about this? We may well be waltzing right into a trap. But I’m confident that as long as I have you and the others backing me up, everything will be fine.”
Heero nodded, “I know, but still, it does trouble the mind.”
Zechs shrugged his shoulders, “Then stop thinking, I need you to be relaxed.”
Heero chuckled, “Ok, I’ll try.”
Zechs smiled, “That’s the spirit, now moving on, did you have a chance to talk to Relena?”
“Yeah, she seemed really worried. Oh, by the way, she told me to tell you that she loves you and that she prays for your safety.”
Zechs nodded his head; Heero placed a hand on his shoulder.
“Hey, did you talk to Noin yet.”
“She said she meet me out here before I leave, but we only have 10 minutes before lift-off.”
Heero put a hand on his shoulder, “Don’t worry Zechs… She’ll come.”
“ZECHS!”
Heero and Zechs turned around to see Noin running at them. She reached Zechs and wrapped his arms around him.
“Oh Zechs, I was afraid I wouldn’t make it.”
Heero saw the intimate moment and decided to check on the others.
“I’ll see you out there Zechs.”
Zechs nodded, “Tell the others to get ready.”
“Good luck Heero,” said Noin.
“Thank you Noin, I’ll see you later.”
Heero left, leaving Zechs and Noin to themselves.
Noin nuzzled her head against his neck; Zechs held her close in his arms. Zechs then looked at her and kissed her tenderly; Noin kissed back with equal force.
When Zechs was done he looked her in the eye, “I’m glad I could see you.”
Noin smiled, “Like I was going to let my man go out to battle without his girl wishing him off.”
Zechs smiled and kissed her again, “Thank you… Noin, I want to give you this.”
He lightly grasped her finger and placed a wedding ring on it. Noin’s looked at him in shock as her eyes began to tear up.
“Oh Zechs, but why?”
Zechs smiled, “Just think about it as a reminder of things to come.”
Noin wrapped his hands around him and cried, the two then kissed each other with more passion than ever before.
This is your last reminder, all Pilots report to your designated area.
Zechs broke the kiss and looked into her eyes, “I have to go now; I’ll see you when I get back.”
“Zechs… please be safe out there.”
A tear rolled down his face, “I will, you just be strong.”
“I will, I love you Zechs.”
Zechs gave her one last kiss, “I love you too Noin.”
He gave her hand a squeeze and made his way to the lift where the others were. As the lift started up Zechs look at Noin. He smiled and blew her a kiss; with tears running down her face, Noin smiled and caught the kiss. She then made her way to the control tower.
Zechs looked over at the other pilots as they prepared to board the Gundams; he gave them a slight nod.
“Alright men, lets end this.”
They boarded their suits, and blasted off towards their destination.
Noin watched from the COM tower as the pilots disappeared from view. She lowered her head and put her hand to her chest. “Zechs…”
Kale’s Ship
Kale smiled as he though of the battle to come. He was positive that the Preventer’s got his false message, he was also positive that they would come for his head. And when they did, he had a little surprise in store for them.
“Sir, the Preventer fleet is close, Should we send in the Gemini’s?” asked Lt. Ramirez.
Kale shook his head, “Not yet, but move the Virgo’s into position.”
“Yes sir.”
Kale smiled as he saw the Virgo’s get into position. “Gundam’s…your time is over.”
Kale began to laugh menacingly.
Space (Near Target)
“Man Heero, what are you going to do once this is over?” asked Duo.
“I’m not sure; I’ll probably just get my position back on the senate.”
Trowa chuckled, “Oh I’m sure that diplomacy is right up your alley.”
Heero’s eyes narrowed, “What’s that supposed to mean, I’ve been doing a good job so far.”
Quatre smiled, “That’s probably because everyone’s afraid that you’ll shoot them if they oppose you.”
“Oh come on, I would never shoot them.”
Zechs eye’s raised, “You wouldn’t?”
“Of course not, that’s way to simplistic. Now planting C4 underneath their desks, that’s more like it.”
Wu-Fei sighed, “Some things never change, anyways, enough with the chit chat, were approaching the Target Zone.”
The pilots looked ahead and saw a small convoy of ships escaping.
Heero smiled, “Gentlemen, there’s are target, let’s blow those bastards to hell and go home…ATTACK!”
The Gundam pilots and the other ships charged full speed ahead at the enemy. Suddenly, a huge laser beam cut right through a Preventer Cruiser, incinerating it.
“SHIT, WHERE, THE HELL DID THAT SHOT COME FROM!” yelled Zechs.
“I DON’T KNOW, I DIDN’T SEE A DAMNED THING!” said Quatre.
“What the, oh no… RADAR CONTACT, its VIRGOS, BUT THERE’S OVER 500 OF THEM!” yelled Trowa.
“HOLY SHIT, IT’S AN AMBUSH, ITS A FUCKING AMBUSH,” Screamed Duo.
“ALL MOBILE SUIT CARRIERS, DEPLOY SUITS NOW,” Ordered Wu-Fei.
Duo and Wu-Fei activated their beam weapons, with a yell they charged at the nearest group of mobile suits. Quatre fought them up close while Trowa picked them off from a distance. Heero and Zechs began firing off there huge cannons in an effort to reduce their numbers.
The Preventer’s were fighting for their lives; The Cruisers had unleashed their missile pods and now were firing their guns. The carriers had released the Serpent suits that were now firing in every direction.
Duo flew towards a group, raised his scythe, and sliced through 5 dolls. Wu-Fei impaled 3 with his trident and used his claws to destroy 2 more. Quatre charged forward and sliced 2 in half; he then swung his deadly blades and began decapitating one doll after another. Trowa let his missiles fly and was now firing upon multiple groups of Virgos. Heero and Zechs had abandoned there guns and now were slicing through suit after suit with there beam sabers.
“COME ON KALE, IS THIS THE BEST YOU CAN DO!” yelled Heero as he obliterated a doll with his beam saber.
Quatre sliced another Virgo in half, “These Dolls are being controlled by a single ship, if we find it, we can disable all the suits in the area.”
“Then we have to find that control ship and destroy it before this gets out of hand!” Answered Zechs as he plunged his saber through a Virgo.
Control Ship (Kale’s Ship)
Kale couldn’t help being proud of himself. The Preventer’s had fallen right into their trap. His high-powered laser worked like a charm, and now Gundams were busy fighting the Virgo suits.
“My revenge is almost complete… Ramirez, send out the Gemini suits.”
Ramirez grinned, “Yes sir.”
Kale smiled sickly and began to laugh.
Space
It was a hard battle, with losses mounting on both sides, but the Preventers were starting to get the upper hand. The Virgo’s numbers were slowly being reduced, and it was only a matter of time until the Preventers achieved total victory.
Heero slashed through a suit and looked on at the battle, they had lost a few cruisers and serpent suits, but Kale’s dolls were defiantly taking the brute of the battle. Still though, it would take awhile before they finished off all the suits Heero was about to rejoin the battles when his radar went off the charts.
“What the hell? Everyone, I have multiple incomings headed this way.”
“What? How many? asked Zechs.
“About 200, but they’re not showing up as any suits I know of.”
“Guys, look up to the east.” Ordered Wu-Fei.
The pilots looked on a saw a large group of suits that resembled Taurus’s in jet-mode, but they looked slightly bigger.
“What the hell… are those Taurus’s?” asked Duo.
“No they can’t be, they’re too big to be normal Taurus’s,” replied Wu-Fei.
Trowa raised his guns, “Well whatever they are, I’ll bet they’re not friendly.”
A large number of Serpent suits flew in front of the Gundams.
“Don’t worry guys, we can handle this,” said one of them.
They immediately sped off towards the group.
“NO COME BACK!” yelled Wu-Fei.
But it was too late; the Serpent suits closed in on them and prepared to fire. Suddenly the Gemini’s all sped up and transformed out of jet mode. A short beam saber appeared from some of their right arms and they sliced through the first wave of Serpent Suits. The remaining suits returned fire but saw their shots get blocked by the Gemini’s shielding pods. The Gundam pilots then looked on in horror as the rest of the Gemini’s took out the remaining suits with their chain guns. The remaining Virgo’s then fell back to link up with the Gemini suits.
“EVERYONE FORM UP!” yelled Zechs.
The Gundam pilots and Zechs flew to the front and formed a battle line; the rest of the Preventers fell in behind him. Heero grabbed his buster rifle and pointed it at the suits.
“OPEN FIRE!”
Everyone began firing at the suits, but saw their shields deflect all of their shots, not even Heero’s buster rifle could break through.
“Guys, they’re combining all their shields together to form an impenetrable barrier!” yelled Quatre.
“So what do we do?” asked Trowa.
Heero tossed aside his rifle, “We have to get in close,” He pulled out his beam saber, “ALL FORCES ATTACK!”
The Preventer’s charged the group head on; most of the Gemini’s did the same while the Virgo’s and a few Gemini’s stayed back in their shields, the desperate battle had begun.
Heero launched himself at a Gemini and swung his sword at it; it blocked the attack and thrust its saber forward. Heero dodged the attack and sliced the suit down the middle. However he suddenly found himself under immense fire, he dodged right but then saw a Gemini above him ready to strike.
“YOU WISH!”
Duo smashed into the suit knocking it back, he then sliced it away with his scythe. Immediately he came under fire, he wrapped his wings around his body to shield him and sped away.
“You need to watch yourself Heero!”
Heero nodded, “Thanks Duo,” Another suit lunged at him but this time he easily dispatched it.
Quatre skillfully slashed through a suit and dodged a lunge from another suit. He then responded by slashing its arm off, followed by its head.
“This is getting out of hand. Guys, these suits are being controlled by the same control ship.”
Suddenly a suit came out of nowhere, its sword raised to attack. Instinctively, he raised his sword to block, but the beam sword slashed right through the sword and scathed the front of his suit. Quatre winced as his cockpit shock but used his other sword to slice the doll in half.
Trowa saw 5 Gemini’s with their blades drawn flying straight at him. He mowed them all down but suddenly came under heavy fire from the other Gemini’s and Virgos. He sped left to avoid the blasts and raised his guns in an attempt to fire back when a Gemini appeared out of nowhere and sliced most of Heavyarms left arm off. He quickly backed off and blasted it away with his other gun.
“Are you alright Trowa?” yelled Quatre.
Trowa looked at what was left of his suits arm, “Yeah, I still have one good arm left.”
He then aimed his guns at a group of suits and began firing upon them.
Duo slashed through a group of suits and headed towards another but found he was cutoff by intense fire. He sped away to avoid it and saw a Gemini coming at him, sword raised. The suit slashed at him, but Duo managed to parry it with his scythe, knocking the suit back in the process. He then lunged forward and sliced the suit down the middle. Suddenly, he heard the sound of his missile radar going off. He turned around just as a missile impacted his suit, followed by a few others, sending his Gundam flying. He quickly regained control, but then saw two more missiles headed towards him.
“Heads up!”
Suddenly Wu-Fei’s claws flew past Duo and impacted into the missiles. When the smoke had cleared Duo saw that both of his claws were partially destroyed.
“You alright Duo?” asked Wu-Fei.
Duo nodded, “Yeah, thanks Wu-Fei, you saved my ass. Can you still use your claws?”
Wu-Fei retracted his claws and looked at them, “They’re pretty banged but I think there still usable.”
His radar suddenly went off and he saw a few suits coming at them.
“I got them.”
He sped towards them and launched his claws at them; he destroyed two and quickly retracted them and drew out his spear. He knocked away an attack from one suit and responded by slashing it in half. Another suit took a swing at him but he ducked it and impaled the suit. Suddenly he saw Duo charge in front of him and wipe out a suit with his beam scythe.
“We have to work together or else we won’t make it out of here.”
Wu-Fei nodded, “Right, LETS GO!”
Control Ship (Kale’s Ship)
Kale looked on at the battle, a sick smile plastered on his face.
“Sir.”
Kale turned around and saw Lt. Ramirez approaching him.
“You wanted to see me sir?”
“Yes Ramirez, inform the pilot to prepare to move towards the battle on my signal.”
“But sir, why?”
“In the past few weeks that the Gundams have arrived, people have been questioning my ability to rule. However if I can kill just one of them, I will be able to solidify my position as new ruler of Earth Sphere.”
“Maybe so but it would be a substantial risk to us.”
Kale glared at him, “What is risky lieutenant is disobeying my orders, now stop questioning me and follow my command!”
“Yes sir,” said Ramirez hesitantly.
Space
The Gundam pilots fought bravely, but there were just too many suits. They were now beginning to run out of armor and weapons. Duo scythe and Wu-Fei’s trident were running low on energy. One of Quatre’s blades was broken and the other was close to breaking too. Trowa had run out of ammo and was now resorting to hitting the Virgo’s with their fists. Heero and Zechs were fighting up close, there sabers running low on power.
Zechs stabbed a suit, knocked it away, blocked another attack, and slashed the suit in half. He saw another Gemini approaching him so he lashed out at it with his heat whip and caught it around the head. He then threw it into another suit, destroying them both. He then saw a Virgo coming at him out of the corner of his eye. He flew towards it, dodged its blaster, and impaled it through the head. Suddenly a Gemini came up behind him and slashed its sword at him. He tried to dodge it but it still grazed the back of his suit. Zechs gritted his teeth as the cockpit shook violently. But before the Gemini could attack again, Heero destroyed it with his shoulder chain guns.
“ZECHS ARE YOU ALRIGHT?” yelled Heero.
“I’LL LIVE, ARE YOU OKAY?”
“I DON’T HAVE MUCH LEFT; WE NEED TO FIND THE DAMNED CONTROL SHIP!”
“I KNOW, BUT WE HAVE TO KEEP FIGHTING!” Shouted Zechs.
“ZECHS, WE HAVE TO RETREAT NOW!” Screamed Duo.
Trowa flew towards a suit and slammed his fists into it, “WE CAN’T RETREAT, WE’RE CUT OFF!”
Suddenly a series of blasts connected with the back of his suit, a large piece of metal from his cockpit flew off and impaled itself in Trowa’s abdomen.
“AHHHH!”
“TROWA, ARE YOU OKAY?” screamed Zechs.
“S…sorry… I…I can’t…” Trowa clutched his side and fought to stay conscious as blood flowed from the wound.
With Trowa unable to fight, Heavy arms just drifted in space and came under intense fire.
“NO TROWA!” yelled Heero.
Duo charged forward, “I’LL GO RESCUE HIM!”
A Gemini suit suddenly appeared in front of him he tore through it, but not before it had stabbed its beam sword through his upper chest, completely disabling him.
“SHIT, I CAN’T MOVE, MY FUCKING CONTROLS ARE STUCK!”
Heero looked over at Quatre, “QUATRE, DUO AND TROWA ARE SITTING DUCKS OUT THERE, HELP THEM OUT!”
Quatre sliced through another suit, “RIGHT,” He threw what was left of his sword into an on coming suit., “Hang on guys!”
He flew to them and grabbed both suits with his hands, “DON’T WORRY GUYS I GOT YOU,” He turned on his afterburners and tried to get out of there. But now he was coming under severe fire., “HEERO, I CAN’T GET OUT, THERE STILL TOO MANY SUITS!”
“YOU HAVE TOO TRY, IF WE ALL GO DOWN, THE PREVENTER’S ARE FINISHED!”
“I’LL TRY!”
He flew straight, but a large group of dolls got in his way and began firing. Quatre did his best to shield his friends from the blasts, but the torrent of fire was taking its toll on Sandrock. Every time he took a blast, a piece of his cockpit would come off and cut him. He grimaced as a small piece of metal got lodged in his arm. Suddenly a blast sent a piece of his helmet across his forehead, creating a large gash. Blood flowed into his left eye and down his face “I have to get them out of here!”
Zechs sliced upward and destroyed another suit, “WU-FEI, YOU HAVE TO TRY AND GIVE QUATRE SOME COVER!”
“OK,” He flew forward and began slicing any suit that got in his way. Suddenly a blast hit his cockpit. The cockpit shook so violently, the glass around his helmet shattered and rained down on his face., “AHHHHH GOD, I CAN’T SEE, I CAN’T SEE!”
Zechs watched in horror as Shenlong, began moving in all directions. Zechs lowered his head and looked at Heero, “Heero… were all that’s left, all the other Gundams are disabled…I’m sorry.”
“ZECHS, GOD-DAMN IT DON’T GIVE UP ON ME NOW!”
Heero slashed through some more mobile dolls. But as he looked around him, he knew it was hopeless. There were far too many mobile dolls, the Preventers were dropping like flies, and the other Gundams were disabled. Out of the corner of his eyes he saw a small group of Serpent suits that were firing in every direction get completely annihilated by massive fire from the mobile dolls. He then looked on in horror as a few Preventer cruisers were slashed to pieces by a couple of Gemini suits. As he scanned the battlefield some more, he saw that a large group of Virgo's and Gemini’s had surrounded Quatre, Duo, and Trowa and were pounding the suits with heavy fire. His gazed then shifted to Wu-Fei who was struggling to keep control of his suit while fighting off the attacks from the mobile dolls. However, despite his best efforts, the Virgo’s cannons, and the Gemini’s beam swords were slowly picking his suit apart. Heero continued fighting, but he knew that unless he found the control ship, they were all doomed. Suddenly, out of the shadows of space, a huge ship emerged. Heero immediately knew what it was; he turned on his Com-link and quickly contacted Zechs.
“ZECHS I SPOTTED THE CONTROL SHIP, I’M GOING IN!”
Heero sliced up some dolls and proceeded to fly straight toward it.
Zechs finished off another suit and flew after Heero, “WAIT HEERO, I’M COMING WITH YOU!”
Control Ship
Kale looked from the screen and saw Wing Zero approaching. “That’s it come to me.”
“Prepare to fire the Devastator Ray,” He said with a smile “Now Zero-One, let’s see how your suit fares against my ultimate weapon.”
The cannon charged up and locked on too Wing Zero.
Space
Heero pointed his saber forward and prepared to strike. Suddenly a huge blast came from the ship.
Heero’s eyes opened wide “OH NO, I CAN’T DODGE IT!”
Heero closed his eyes and braced for impact.
“HEERO!”
Zechs sped in at the last second and flew in front of Zero, taking the brunt of the blast. The massive beam instantly engulfed Tallgeese and then hit his suit as well. The cockpit shook violently as the beam began tearing away at his suit. When the beam had passed, Heero looked up and saw that Tallgeese was still there. However, both legs and one arm had been blow off. There were sparks flying in all direction, and it appeared that it was heavily damaged. Heero tried to move, but saw that his suit was all but disabled. He then turned on his Com link and frantically tried to hail Zechs.
Control ship
“WHAT DO YOU MEAN OUR POWER IS OFFLINE?” yelled Kale.
“The blast from the Devastator Ray overheated our entire system, we have nothing right now!” said Lt. Ramirez
Kale looked around at the battlefield, and while all the Gundams appeared to be disabled; his mobile dolls were also offline.
He looked back at Ramirez, “How long till we have power again?”
“It should take about 5 minute’s sir.”
Kale thought for a moment, “Prepare for our emergency plan.”
Ramirez nodded, “Yes sir.”
Space
“ZECHS, ZECHS, CAN YOU HEAR ME, ZECHS, GOD-DAMN-IT PLEASE, ANSWER ME!”
Suddenly, Zech’s bloodied and battered face appeared on screen.
“H…Hee…Heero.”
Heero brought one hand to his mouth, “Oh god Zechs, are you alright?”
Zechs grimaced in pain, “M… most of my bones… a… are broken… h… hard to breathe.”
Heero began to panic, “Don’t worry Zechs I’ll get you out of there!”
Zechs slowly shook his head, “M… my hatch is disabled…my engines our gone… I only have… my backup boosters.”
“B…But Zechs, There has to be a way to get you out!”
Zechs lowered his head, “No… no escaping this time, theirs only one thing I can do… Heero, I’m sorry.”
Zechs turned on his reserve booster and flew towards the Control Ship.
Heero’s eyes opened wide, “NO ZECHS, YOU CAN’T DO THIS, THERE HAS TO BE ANOTHER WAY!”
“It’s our only chance… I’m so sorry, but this is it for me.”
"NO DAMN IT, I CAN SAVE YOU, YOU JUST HAVE TO HOLD ON!"
Heero flipped every switch and pressed every button to try and start his suit back up, but nothing happened. He slammed his fists into his control panel and yelled out loud.
"This isn't happening, this can't be happening, oh god no!"
He wanted to say something to try and stop him but it was futile. He slumped back into his chair as tears began to roll down his face.
Tears fell from Zechs face, he looked up to where the other’s were, “Everyone, please… look after Noin for me… please, take care of her.”
As his suit got closer to the ship, he gazed around the battlefield one last time, “It was my greatest honor to have lived by your sides and to be able to call you my brothers, I love you all and I hope that you all live out your lives the best you can.”
He looked back at the screen, “Heero… please be strong… and never forget this day… never forget the lives lost here… and look after my sister… She’ll need your strength now.”
“Zechs… you’re my family… my brother… I swear on my life that I won’t disgrace you.”
Zechs swallowed hard, “Tell Noin and Relena… that I love them very much… and that I’ll always be with them… Heero farewell my brother”
Heero wept aloud, “Zechs… I… I...”
Zechs smiled and touched the screen "Brother..."
His screen then went black as Tallgeese came within a few meters of the ship. Zechs closed his eyes and his fingers hovered over the self-detonation button.
“Noin…please forgive me.”
With the last ounce of his strength he slammed his fist down on the button. Tallgeese exploded in a bright flash, taking out the ship with him. As the smoke began to clear Heero looked around, hoping for the impossible. When the smoke disappeared, all that could be seen was debris.
Heero’s body trembled began to tremble, “Zechs… Zechs… AHHHHHHH!”
Moon Base 1
One by one the grief stricken pilots landed their Gundams. A stretcher was brought in for Trowa; he lost a lot of blood but was still conscious. Tears had welled up in his eyes but he said nothing as the medics carried him away. A medic tended to Quatre’s arm as he looked down at the ground, tears rolling off his face. Wu- Fei still sat in his cockpit, one hand covering his face as he sobbed uncontrollably. Duo yelled and began pounding his fist into the wall; he pounded on the wall until his hands became bloodied. He then buried his face in his hands as blood and tears fell to the ground. Heero slowly exited his cockpit and walked down the steps. When he reached the floor, he staggered a bit, and collapsed to the ground with a sob. Tears fell down his cheeks as he rubbed his face into the steel floor. Suddenly he noticed that someone was standing over him. As he looked up, tears still running, he made eye contact with Lucrenzia Noin. He slowly got to her face; eye’s never leaving hers. Noin just looked at him, her face completely blank, but still showing overwhelming sadness. She suddenly dropped to her knees and let out a loud cry of grief, Heero wrapped his arms around her and tried to console her, but to no avail. Noin buried her face in his shoulder and cried and yelled Zechs name, Heero held her close still crying himself.
“Noin I’m sorry…I’m so sorry… oh god.”
He looked up at the ceiling “Zechs…”
End Ch-6
End Part 2
Hey everyone sorry for the long wait for this part to come out. I had to do some pretty extensive re-writing and it took a lot of time to do. Fortunately the next few chapters don’t require as much re-writing (mostly just grammar stuff and punctuation). At least until I get to Parts 6 and 7, but at least the next few parts will come out a lot quicker. If you have any comments about this feel free to send me an e-mail or write me a review. Constructive criticism is also welcome as I am always trying to improve upon my writing. Just be sure to let me know what you think.
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